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God's Painting
I watched awe-struck today as God painted the sky.
On bright bice-blue canvas He splashed silver-grey hue.
By joining with his breath the works of his brush strokes
He formed pictures of dragon, dog and kangaroo.
Then he blew them apart to float through the ether
and dissipate slowly in the depths of the void.
I contemplate time and the past that’s retreated
faded and lost, like the clouds seemingly destroyed.
My vision is drawn to a small receptacle
that holds the ashes of the dusty suit you wore
while here in this cold world of manifest secrets
and my heart knows a fear I will see you no more.
Then I remember sights of the heavens at night
when cloaking sun’s brightness can no longer conceal
another world comprising millions of candles
lighting directions, other places to reveal.
And I realise that all is not as it seems.
Things may be invisible but nothing is gone.
And like the day’s artwork of God’s lustrous painting
we simply change form, blend with creation, move on.
Critiques
shirley harrison
15 years 11 months ago
oh Judy
judyanne
15 years 11 months ago
thank you so much shirley
Bonitaj
15 years 11 months ago
ah Judy!
judyanne
15 years 11 months ago
thank you boni
Tonya
15 years 11 months ago
Judyanne,
judyanne
15 years 11 months ago
love to you tonya
Tonya
15 years 11 months ago
:)
judyanne
15 years 11 months ago
you are a gem
Tonya
15 years 11 months ago
oops, my bad... lol
judyanne
15 years 11 months ago
no - i'm aussie
Tonya
15 years 11 months ago
lol... okay another oops..
xena465
15 years 11 months ago
I love the title
judyanne
15 years 11 months ago
thank you rosina
Nordic cloud
15 years 11 months ago
He is in the colours of the sunset judyanne I'm sure.
judyanne
15 years 11 months ago
love to you annanya
Seren
15 years 11 months ago
Dear Judd
judyanne
15 years 11 months ago
don't snakes eat echidnas jc?