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Jun 24, 2010
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Got Her where She wants Me
got her, where she wants me she teases and taunts mein her grinding slow danceyeah I got her in a trance it feels so swellher under my spelleating out of my handyeah I'm her man she walks the lineI'm two steps behindjust enjoying the viewyeah she hasn't a clue she's putty in my handmolding just like I plannedinto my dream girlyeah she's my world got her, where she wants meI'm never going to set me freeget lost in her romanceyeah I got her in a trance copyright 6-16-10 huey horton (hippiepoet69)
— hippiepoet69, Jun 24, 2010
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scribbler
16 years 1 month ago
where she wants
xena465
16 years 1 month ago
Dear Huey
loved
16 years ago
where she would want
hippiepoet69
16 years ago
Thanks loved
hippiepoet69
16 years ago
Thanks Xena
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