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hippiepoet69
Jun 24, 2010 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Got Her where She wants Me

got her, where she wants me she teases and taunts mein her grinding slow danceyeah I got her in a trance it feels so swellher under my spelleating out of my handyeah I'm her man she walks the lineI'm two steps behindjust enjoying the viewyeah she hasn't a clue she's putty in my handmolding just like I plannedinto my dream girlyeah she's my world got her, where she wants meI'm never going to set me freeget lost in her romanceyeah I got her in a trance copyright 6-16-10   huey horton   (hippiepoet69)          
— hippiepoet69, Jun 24, 2010

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scribbler

15 years 11 months ago

where she wants

5 stars for truth of write.All our better halves got us right where wanted.Only ones who don't admit to it are either deluded or liars lol usual good write....scribbler
xena465

xena465

15 years 11 months ago

Dear Huey

We've not seen you around for a while...good write. Xena Quote: Science is what you know; philosophy is what you don't know. - Bertrand Russell
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loved

15 years 11 months ago

where she would want

..by now we all would know and there she goes again lovely want hers and ur needs satisfied i tried but she wanted more lovely one wanted to endure gr888 wtrite urs
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hippiepoet69

15 years 11 months ago

Thanks Xena

I've been busy working around the house. And spending a lot of time on the phone with Holly. I'm at a sister's house for a few days. And her set up on the computer isn't blind friendly. So I won't send much time on it. But I have to look something up for Holly. Even though she's yet to use any info I looked up for her. She always goes a different derection. go figure. LOL. Take Care. huey