lou

Jun 24, 2010 ⭐ See this poem's read count — a supporter feature

unreservedly

Jealousy is such an ugly word
i don't want to give in
i try to avoid it

Green eyed monster rampages
now and again, its true
so i practice being really zen

Makes me look petty
makes me look insecure
and paranoid

Self pity and doubt,
don't tear your insides
out

But when I say I hate you, do you think I mean it ?
Or do you think I bluff
do you think I jest

I’ve had enough of being nice
mustn’t cause a fuss, or any bother
must be calm, don’t raise my voice

Hate and anger are such negative feelings
should i allow you make me feel that way ?

Yes im damned angry
and i hate that you broke my trust

— lou, Jun 24, 2010

About the Author

Region, Country: West London, GBR

Favorite Poets: Pablo Neruda , Jack Kerouac, Alan Ginsberg, D.H Lawrence, Jim Morrison's lyrics,

Critiques

shirley harrison

16 years 1 month ago

L:O:L at last

i get to critic Typo!!! L:8 YOY? is it you?? ok just teasing about being a critic but love this one ,its like Cancer sometimes love it can eat you alive, and jealousy is really one of the most ugly forms. If you love you love! with much love shirley harrison

lou

16 years 1 month ago

Shirley

Thanks love lou xx

shirley harrison

16 years 1 month ago

yes but it was gone after i pressed submit! L:O:L

Ah i can never catch you!!!!!!!! shirley harrison

lou

16 years 1 month ago

Hehe

Nah nah n n nah LOL I'm sure you will catch me . love louxx

hobo

16 years ago

green eyed monster

The green eyed monster is a touch thing to fight. it grips at you and is hard to break its grip. nice write my friend *You can never pick anyone up if you are busy putting them down*

lou

16 years ago

thanks

magics02

16 years ago

Really telling it like it is here

Lou I like that you could express your self well in this poem as I felt it the whole way through. this ending bringing it around for sure Yes im damned angry and i hate that you broke my trust The only thing I have to see is the pome small I's and some capped I's. I would bring it all home and make the entire poem with caps of I's. That is the only raw truth you ask for here that I can give you. Love at you Mona xoo

lou

16 years ago

mona

Thanks lou xx

DawningDaytripper

16 years ago

Let em have it Lou, I never

Let em have it Lou, I never thought anything less and have known you could be a lion possed if the need arose. I like the free flow and unreserved write, very nice to read. Julie D.D.

lou

16 years ago

Julie

Thanks much love lou xx

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