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Jun 24, 2010
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Oh Jimmy, How Badly You Stink
Oh Jimmy, how badly you stinkSo much so, I can’t really thinkSmell permeates both here and thereI tell you this because I care Oh Jimmy, as you’re coming nearGirls are running away in fearWherever we go I can seePeople laughing at you and me Oh Jimmy, now don’t get uptightBut that smell makes Grandma’s alrightJimmy can you move away please?Stand to close then I’m not at ease It’s not for me though, all for youYou smell so bad and have no clueLooks are good, but from this odorPeople sniff and then fall over
— Lil Z, Jun 24, 2010
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greeneyes
15 years 11 months ago
lol
Lil Z
15 years 11 months ago
Nice!
JosephSommers
15 years 11 months ago
Good one Lil z
Lil Z
15 years 11 months ago
Haha!
xena465
15 years 11 months ago
Teh he he
Lil Z
15 years 11 months ago
Thanks Xena!
scribbler
15 years 11 months ago
stink
Lil Z
15 years 11 months ago
Thank you so much!
Sara
15 years 11 months ago
Lol a cute poem
Lil Z
15 years 11 months ago
Thank you again Sara!