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t. reflexion
t. reflexion
Jun 24, 2010 ⭐ See this poem's read count — a supporter feature

GOD WITH US

GOD WITH US Nathan narrated an incidental encounterOn how he felt God coming to meet themWhere a pastor prayed and preached in a roomWhy God should come in, a brother askedWhen he is everywhere in timeless now Another who collaborated this view, saidWhen you wake up in the morning, firstCall on the Name of names, and invokeYou will feel Him coming into the roomTo give you powers to control things around The brother understood not this outlookA roving deity negates the OmnipresenceIn the coming and going business of GodNot as separate and distant as they thoughtMan is linked to the cosmos, he is never alone Look not for God in the closets and roomsNor on the hills, mountains and valleysJourney deeper to the portals of the soul withinWait for the dawn of a new beginningAnd the flow of his subliminal Divinity          
— t. reflexion, Jun 24, 2010

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Country/Region: NGA

Favorite Poets: Inspired by an article in an old manuscript , It reads:, AXIOMS OF PERFECTION, In the physical order – In the realization of the dream of beauty, In the moral order – In the realization of the dream of love, In the intellectual order – In the realization of dream of poetry, In the spiritual order – In the realization of the dream of the mystics

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magics02

16 years ago

Looks like I missed this one

A nice piece here my friend and I liked this especially here the verse Look not for God in the closets and rooms Nor on the hills, mountains and valleys Journey deeper to the portals of the soul within Wait for the dawn of a new beginning And the flow of his subliminal Divinity Very nice write here and thank you for sharing with us. Love,Mona
t. reflexion

t. reflexion

16 years ago

No, you did not miss it...

just a matter of time, my writes are always available for you because you look for them, thank you very much. I appreciate you a lot. Best wishes. T.
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magics02

16 years ago

LOL I didnt look for it..You and IT looked for me LOL

I need to get in touch with you as it has been a while since we chatted and I will do so soon. You write of what you wish and I write of what I wish and I also like when people come and offer up suggests of nay or yea and all that good stuff. I have learned many things from my first week of writing poems and I only feel more readable as I go. It is a wonderful hobby when you love to write and it is a story a long and compelling story about your life. Love at ya guy Mona xoxoxo

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