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Jun 24, 2010
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Emptiness
Yesterday’s sorrow adds up
And spills into tomorrow
The day is shrinking
And I’m still thinking
That nothing
Is ever good enough
So I look at the birds
All the pretty birds
Stretched so thin
Take my mind off
This emptiness
My insides are sad and lonely
And they can not be filled
My head is aching, my bones are shaking
And my skin is crawling with the chills
I pour myself another drink
And eat off an empty plate
My will is dying, my mind is lying
I didn’t lose any weight
So I look at the birds
All the pretty birds
Stretched so thin
Take my mind off
This emptiness
— Natania, Jun 24, 2010
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xena465
15 years 11 months ago
This is so sad...
Natania
15 years 11 months ago
thank you
Roscoe Lane
15 years 11 months ago
Please,
Natania
15 years 11 months ago
thanks :)
reepa
15 years 11 months ago
SO SAD