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loved
loved
Jun 23, 2010 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

THE ULTIMATE deprivation

  

 

THE ULTIMATE 

 

WRITE ANY MORE POETRY ,

 

CONVERSE WITH EITHER 

 

A HE OR SHE 

 

THEN YOU SHALL HAVE 

 

TO DIVORCE ME …

 

 

 

I HATE YOUR TALKING 

 

ACROSS MY BACK 

 

AND 

 

IF YOU CONTINUE  

 

YOU I SHALL HAVE TO SACK  

 

AND 

 

SO I MUST SURRENDER ,

 

MY DESIRE

 

 TO COMPOSE POETRY ENTIRE 

 

FOR MY SPOUSE ALONE 

 

IS MY LIFE ENTIRE

 

ALBEIT  THERE’S NOTHING ELSE 

 

I AM ABLE TO DO 

 

BUT FOR MY SPOUSE 

 

THIS MUCH I AM OBLIGED TO DO . 

 

 

 

SO WAIT 

 

YOU MAY NOT 

 

HEAR FROM ME 

 

TILL I’M BURIED 

 

UNDER THE PALM TREE.
— loved, Jun 23, 2010

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xena465

xena465

15 years 11 months ago

Dear Loved

Great sincere poem. I'm sure it'll be some time before you're buried under that palm tree. Xena Quote: Science is what you know; philosophy is what you don't know. - Bertrand Russell
lou

lou

15 years 11 months ago

Loved

I loved it lol love lou xx
Bonitaj

Bonitaj

15 years 11 months ago

Loved!

I smiled when I read this as it so clearly depicts the dilema we poets have - trying to juggle our personal and creative lives. There's always someone who demands our attention away from the passion that is writing poetry! Clever thought indeed! Bonita j
loved

loved

15 years 11 months ago

my spouse's angst

My spouse's dilemma YOU UNDERSTAND THE DILEMMA BUT IT CURBS AND DISTURBS IN ONES CREATIVITY YET I RISK IT AS THERE IS NO LIFE WITHOUT A SPOUSE MALE OR FEMALE AND IF YOU HAVE TO ACHIEVE RISK IT EITHER WAY YOU SHALL DECEIVE UNLESS YOU YOURSELF YOUR MINDS WISDOM SEAL AND CONTROL THE CIRCUMSTANCES AND the ENVIRONMENT LAUGH AT YOURSELF THAT SHALL DO HOPEFULLY THE SPOUSE WILL FINALLY GIVEN IN TOO. Please read in SMALL CASE . NO not shouting my eyes I can't blame daily.