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hottiey
Jun 23, 2010 ⭐ See this poem's read count — a supporter feature

DEAD TO THE WORLD

 I am dead now
this is my
last poem for
6 months.
For right now
i am dead
to the
world.
No one
likes me
so I guess
that i am
dead to
all of you
and now i say
good
bye
 

— hottiey, Jun 23, 2010
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ziggy

16 years 1 month ago

hi

hi after reading this I had to say hi why are you leaving or was that just a theme? chat soon zigs
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ziggy

16 years 1 month ago

hi

hi after reading this I had to say hi why are you leaving or was that just a theme? chat soon zigs
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hottiey

16 years 1 month ago

this is true

nobody reads my poems or comment on them so i am done for 6 months
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thegodshatter2

16 years 1 month ago

what up. i wrote apoem about

what up. i wrote apoem about this same damn topic true true. i got pissed that no one would comment on my poems or writes so i wrote about it and then decided to stop for a while. but amidst it i decided to say fuck it and not give a shit about who comments or reads my shit. im going to continue to write whether or not people comment because i enjoy writing no matter what the fuck happens. you want a friend you got one. i'll read and comment and you do the same k? simple enough i think(hope). yup it is, Joshua Sky Smith (God Shatter)
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hottiey

16 years 1 month ago

thanx

your right i shouldn't care at all and i will comment on your poems also ~~~~~~Twiztid Jey~~~~~~

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