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Jun 23, 2010
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rain pummels reason
beautiful falling liquid
drizzling its sex spill
drowning dry blossoms
in lush fingers of rain
seeping in the dark
mouth openings
between sweet organic need
and limp branchs like
wild hair draping mysterious
lust full of beads
dripping copius spillways
down sopping
valleys
and swollen tips
stone bowls cupped recieving
more like bath kept navels
the pocket pools where
song birds will wash
naked driftwood lifting
slender limbs
and the singing of
the pattern ringing on
silver surfaces
— Esker, Jun 23, 2010
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Critiques
Professor Purple
16 years 1 month ago
Cool! Reminds me of a short
Esker
16 years 1 month ago
It didnt last for long
poewriter58
16 years 1 month ago
Steve
Esker
16 years 1 month ago
Hey Chrys
poewriter58
16 years 1 month ago
Steve
anonymous1
16 years 1 month ago
This poem could make me not hate the rain.
pleiades
16 years 1 month ago
ooh la lai’ll have what
Tonya Greenlee
16 years 1 month ago
Ahhhhhhh, Steven This poem
Rett
16 years 1 month ago
As always Steven
raskin
16 years 1 month ago
For me it is the driftwood
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