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Once Upon A Time
Once upon a Time
Once upon a time
in a place not far away
Lived a maiden sad and lonely
as she lived from day to day
Now she wasn't always like this
happiness was hers for years
Life was good and love was plentiful
til the day he brought the tears
On that day her world did crumble
what to say..and what to do
Seems her world was just a story
now just black..no more the hues
She was lost...no one to guide her
and her family, could not help
No, this time she was alone
she would have to help herself
So she pondered and she puttered
and she went on with her life
And to all the world , she smiled
saved her crying for dark of night
And her life became routine
happiness a thing of the past
'Til that one day that she saw him
suddenly her heart beat fast
She approached him very slowly
being careful not to stare
But the tingling through her body
lost emotions...now aware
Dare she speak...or could she even
would she even have the words
At that moment, he turned toward her
her knees grew weak..her vision blurred
Now she felt just like a school girl
sweaty palms...rose flushed cheeks
But unlike the girls in childhood
through her body .... spread this heat
On his face... a knowing look
self assured, and haughty too
As he took her by the hand
he's the one, her heart just knew
So they went their way together
passions fire lit their way
And to her ...he gave his love
growing stronger day by day
So in love ..and yes, now happy
vowing to be ever true
Through this lifetime to the next
in darkest days, or skys of blue
But the maiden, had her dark side
secrets kept.... from life before
And though struggling to contain them
ever present...behind that door
Can he save her from herself
will she trust in love, and rapture
She must put her faith in him
so they live happily ever after.
Critiques
Professor Purple
15 years 11 months ago
Nice, a very pleasant read!
jetz
15 years 11 months ago
Hi P.P, Thanks for taking
xena465
15 years 11 months ago
Great Jetz
jetz
15 years 11 months ago
Hi Xena, Glad you found
hippiepoet69
15 years 11 months ago
I Love it
jetz
15 years 11 months ago
Hi Huey, Thanks!!!! I knew
jetz
15 years 11 months ago
SIGH!! I remember….boy, do
judyanne
15 years 11 months ago
difficult to really trust again sue?
jetz
15 years 11 months ago
Hi Judy, I always