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Jun 23, 2010
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As a Verdict of Truth Utters
slide me into a flight suit
shoot me somersaulting
to the stars as I cushion
in ether, to wait,
a solitary orb
dimming
spiked with steel
Fates hand took hold,
she the keeper of answers
secretly and slowly,
spun the arms of time
and found the key
to a treasure
we thought,
we had been patient
until Science and Religion
made a pact with fate
my Pandora's box is opening
and I may just shoot to the stars
— Seren, Jun 23, 2010
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judyanne
16 years 1 month ago
jc
Seren
16 years 1 month ago
I would be surprised if anyone will
Professor Purple
16 years 1 month ago
I also get my own personal
Seren
16 years 1 month ago
Good call Antoine will fix
ziggy
16 years 1 month ago
hi
Seren
16 years 1 month ago
Dear Ziggy
scribbler
16 years 1 month ago
truth
Seren
16 years 1 month ago
Dear Stan
greeneyes
16 years 1 month ago
This one could mean
Seren
16 years 1 month ago
Dear Elizabeth
magics02
16 years 1 month ago
Shoot me to the stars
Seren
16 years 1 month ago
Dear Mona
xena465
16 years 1 month ago
Brilliant, just Brilliant JayCee.
Seren
16 years 1 month ago
I used the space metaphor
shirley harrison
16 years 1 month ago
wonderful JC
shirley harrison
16 years 1 month ago
wonderful JC
Seren
16 years 1 month ago
Waiting on a justice of
Geezer
16 years 1 month ago
The visuals here...
Seren
16 years 1 month ago
LMAO I loved your vision …
lou
16 years 1 month ago
JayCee
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