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Jun 23, 2010
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A SHITTY POEM (so who wants ta read it? ;-) )
This piece is shit, it’s a flop
Something I had better drop
You like ta read it? Then yer blind
It really stinks no it reeks
Structure’s fulla holes and leaks
I’d like ta chase it from my mind
It’s just no use, this just blows,
Where it leads ta no one knows,
The point ta it, no one can find
Such a great waste, all this time
Lookin’ fer some silly rhyme
Why can’t I just leave it behind?
I should be a bit more rash,
Fuckin’ throw it in the trash,
If you comment, fellas, please be kind!
— Professor Purple, Jun 23, 2010
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Critiques
Lil Z
15 years 11 months ago
Brilliant!
Professor Purple
15 years 11 months ago
LOL I was almost afraid to
scribbler
15 years 11 months ago
poem
Professor Purple
15 years 11 months ago
Wow thanks! LOL I wasn’t
judyanne
15 years 11 months ago
title got me in
Professor Purple
15 years 11 months ago
Thanks! And I do recommend
Beauregard
15 years 11 months ago
LOL
Rett
15 years 11 months ago
GAG!
Professor Purple
15 years 11 months ago
You're all so kind!
shirley harrison
15 years 11 months ago
L:O:L
Professor Purple
15 years 11 months ago
Why thank you Shirley!
Candlewitch
15 years 11 months ago
Dear Antoine
Professor Purple
15 years 11 months ago
Thanks Cat,