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lou

Jun 23, 2010 ⭐ See this poem's read count — a supporter feature

Melt Me

Images of you invade my brain
melt me like warm chocolate

lay me down and comfort me
let me quench my thirst

drizzle me down your skin
allow my love to drench you

lets cling together my love
two bodies as one

memorize me , enthrall me ,
heat me up

— lou, Jun 23, 2010

About the Author

Region, Country: West London, GBR

Favorite Poets: Pablo Neruda , Jack Kerouac, Alan Ginsberg, D.H Lawrence, Jim Morrison's lyrics,

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16 years 1 month ago

Hi Lou

Lightly erotic and heavily enticing, but dreamily yummy! Always, Cat

16 years 1 month ago

Cat

I try lol love lou xx

16 years 1 month ago

Ohhh for the days...

When I could still have chocolate! As usual, your predeliction for food based dalliance, has tempted the palatte of my mind. Another round of desert please! Love it, ~ Gee xx

16 years 1 month ago

Gee

got a sweet tooth ah ? Love Lou xx

SH

shirley harrison

16 years 1 month ago

fu..ing brilliant!

are you on heat or do you need heat either way i'm hot! L:O:L much love lou! brilliantness is you! shirley harrison

16 years 1 month ago

Oh Shirley

I'm just hot , hot , hot LOL Thanks Shirley much love xx

16 years 1 month ago

pure heat

There is pure heat in this one. nice write You can never pick anyone up if you are busy putting them down

16 years 1 month ago

Randy

Why thank you sir , lol love lou xx

M

16 years 1 month ago

Chocolate Lou

A tantalizing write of yours once again. Good job gal Mona xoxo

16 years 1 month ago

Mona

Thanks pal love lou xx

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