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A Psalm for the Prisoner

O Lord, hear my simple cry;
set this weary captive free!
For I’m condemned by my past,
imprisoned by the dungeon of me.

Break the restraints of attachment
that are distressing my soul -
Destroy the chains of my ignorance,
which continue to undermine Your control.

Forcefully storm the stony gates
that shelter the stronghold of my heart.
Let the destructive plague be swept away!
I thirst for Your Presence, as the woodland hart.

The shadow of Your magnificent wings,
protect me from the terrors of the night.
Shine Your Light into my spirit, thus allowing me…
To firmly stand by faith and not by human sight.

Lord, I offer this pledge to You -
Yours, are my love and humble devotion,
in exchange for your unerring counsel
and my acceptance of Your Salvation.

For now, a sentry of angels surround me,
forming a holy prayer circle of peace.
Embrace me with Your loving kindness,
as I desire… Your permanent release.


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Author Notes:

Loosely based on:

Psalm 91, Hebrews 11:1, Luke 4:18, Psalm 102:20, John 8:12,31-36, Psalm 42:1-2

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— Joseph J. Breunig 3rd, Jun 23, 2010

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U K Atiyodi

15 years 11 months ago

How soothing! Like the

How soothing! Like the moonlight. love, the gleam of it, is spread everywhere. God is with you, Joseph j Breun. Such poems have eternal value despite the recurrence of the ideas.When we are encircled by angels, that too as sentry, it is really rewarding.
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poewriter58

15 years 11 months ago

Joseph

I never critique someones prayer as I believe in the power of them. This was so peaceful to read, it is lovely Chrys
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magics02

15 years 11 months ago

Great read

I like it and the only thing I need to ask is some words are capped?? All in all a good write there Maine poet. Mona
Joseph J. Breunig 3rd

Joseph J. Breu…

15 years 11 months ago

RE: Capping of some words...

Hi Mona - In terms of writing convention, references to God, the Trinity, Jehovah, Scripture and Christ are capitalized, including pronouns that reference them, such as: Yours and His. In The Word, there is a Scripture verse that states that Christ is the Way, the Truth and the Light; so accordingly, I tend to capitalize those words as well. I hope that clarifies this issue to you. --Joe Breunig
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magics02

15 years 11 months ago

Yes I am aware of that

I guess it did not look right the Your being capped. But it is your poem and it is good thank your for the comment back. Mona