Scary Things

THIS WAS GOOD!

Curious though? Who is it that you've seen? I'm a bit dim-witted and can't think who it is, ha ha. Xena Quote: Science is what you know; philosophy is what you don't know. - Bertrand Russell

A painful subject , but tackled well. The only thing i would say line 3 doesn't scan very well, hope you don't mind me correcting your grammer, maybe you could say , ' that look he gives.' Otherwise a great read. love lou xx

Hobo this is an amazing piece ,but am i right by thinking its a poem of a boy and his dad? usually i am really good, but this one has me thinking of quite a few senarios! i would love to know your thought behind this one! great poetry as i will be sitting waiting to see if i was right,or wrong! Much love shirley harrison

oh i am so glad as this one could have been many things to many people so well done as i'm sure people have been thinking, Hobo many of us have experienced the same, as a childrens nanny i guess i can understand the child who was crying! beautiful,sad but brilliant! sending some love from me! shirley harrison

This poem perfectly describes how a father's look can create havoc in a child's mind. I don't remember when it happened, but one day I was relieved/rescued from the look of my father's eyes that had been a constant intrusion in my youth. I haven't thought about how his eyes seemed to follow me everywhere (even when he wasn't present) for so many years. You have penned a deeply moving poem that is thought-provoking and very well written. I applaud you! I never say anything I don't mean nor do I say anything to be mean.