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Jun 23, 2010
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A place of one breath
Come and feel the sensational essence ofpeaceharmonytranquilitythat is painted in the atmosphere Come and touch the rolling hills that isOozing with the spirit of Ubuntu In a place where no man is an Island but afatherbrotherfriendto all that has breath A place where love walks barewithout the fear of being tested by time A place where kindness speaks throughthe tonguethe eyeand the handsof those who call it a home Home where one mother’s bosom is a sanctuaryand a comfort zone for the entire nation and thenation has nothing but reverence for her A place where lady Justiceis a loyal servant to the noble andthe poor alike A place where great minds are sharpened bygreat spears of indigenous knowledgethis is a place where I was borna place of one breath.
— Moloko D. Mahuma, Jun 23, 2010
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Seren
15 years 11 months ago
Dear Moloko ~! I am going to
Moloko D. Mahuma
15 years 11 months ago
Thank you JayCee
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NominatedLove JayCee (“In
greeneyes
15 years 11 months ago
I just came across your
Moloko D. Mahuma
15 years 11 months ago
Thank you Elizabeth
xena465
15 years 11 months ago
Dear Moloko
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15 years 11 months ago
Thanks
xena465
15 years 11 months ago
You're so lovely Moloko
Moloko D. Mahuma
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Thank you my sister
xena465
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shirley harrison
15 years 11 months ago
breath taking poetry
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Thank you Shirley
Kailashana
15 years 11 months ago
What an oasis of shining
Moloko D. Mahuma
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Thank you
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15 years 11 months ago
Hi
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Thank you Reepa
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Hi
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Hi
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raj
15 years 11 months ago
Hello Moloko
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15 years 11 months ago
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loved
15 years 11 months ago
par excellence
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Thank you Loved
judyanne
15 years 11 months ago
beautiful moloka
Moloko D. Mahuma
15 years 11 months ago
Thank you Judy