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faithmairee
faithmairee
Jun 23, 2010 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

what's in my heart

ask anyone-
you be beautiful
through and through
(and that's no lie)
you're the kind
can drive a girl crazy
with just your eyes

ain't no mistakin'-
you be fine
(even finer in
that shade of blue)

no need contemplatin'
over what's in my heart
the word is love, dear one
and you can be sure of this-
it's a given
— faithmairee, Jun 23, 2010

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Region, Country: Florida, United States, USA

Favorite Poets: Lawrence Ferlinghetti, Edna St. Vincent Millay, Lucille Clifton and Elizabeth Bishop

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faithmairee

faithmairee

15 years 11 months ago

No, Thank You

I'm glad you liked my poem. I never say anything I don't mean nor do I say anything to be mean.
xena465

xena465

15 years 11 months ago

Nice one Faith

Everyone loves a good love poem...Well done. Xena Quote: Science is what you know; philosophy is what you don't know. - Bertrand Russell
faithmairee

faithmairee

15 years 11 months ago

Thanks So Much

Thank you, Xena. I appreciate your wonderful comments very much. I never say anything I don't mean nor do I say anything to be mean.
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Atticus

15 years 11 months ago

Great write! Constructed

Great write! Constructed nicely with character naturally added in places, yet still concise. Enjoyable read it is. Be well, Nathaniel
faithmairee

faithmairee

15 years 11 months ago

Thanks For Reading & Commenting

Thank you for taking the time to read and comment on my poem. I am glad you enjoyed it. I never say anything I don't mean nor do I say anything to be mean.