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Jun 22, 2010
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Planting Seed in the Sand
As you've spread seeds
I've swept them all up
this hatred you spew
is on a bent to disrupt
~~~
Neopoet is a place
for artists and friends,
we don't always agree
'cause we hate to bend
but looking for space
in the middle ground,
with a mind for friendship
we laugh to resound
I look for the light
with a heart on my mind,
I am searching for grace
between the words that I find
we debate the trajectory
of comets and stars,
for in poetry we reach
to venture to mars
we have poets that can break
the hardest heart in two,
and poets who bring cheer
when your feeling blue
we have it all here
on the shores of the stars,
and if you cant see it?
your retina's are scarred
~~~
now go fertilize the seed
and help them to grow,
for I know that your hatred
will eat you real slow
— Seren, Jun 22, 2010
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Critiques
judyanne
16 years 1 month ago
great write jc
Seren
16 years 1 month ago
Dear Judd
Professor Purple
16 years 1 month ago
Yes, great write, and how
Seren
16 years 1 month ago
Dear Professor P
Nordic cloud
16 years 1 month ago
Rock on Jayne rock on
Seren
16 years 1 month ago
My Dearest Friend
Kailashana
16 years 1 month ago
The thing, JC, Prof. is that
Seren
16 years 1 month ago
I read somewheresurprise
scribbler
16 years 1 month ago
don't think you wrote this for "stars"so none given
Seren
16 years 1 month ago
this site will be fine we
greeneyes
16 years 1 month ago
Beautiful, thats all I have
Seren
16 years 1 month ago
thank you hun
CyberSpace
16 years 1 month ago
I know what your asking but
Seren
16 years 1 month ago
Yeah I know … love me
shirley harrison
16 years 1 month ago
Excellently written
Seren
16 years 1 month ago
Dear Shirley
Lil Z
16 years 1 month ago
A brilliant write!
Seren
16 years 1 month ago
Dear Lil Z
hobo
16 years 1 month ago
I love it
Seren
16 years 1 month ago
Dear Randy
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