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LZ
Lil Z
Jun 22, 2010 ⭐ See this poem's read count — a supporter feature

Things to Say

It‘s not enoughTo speak my mindMy words are roughAnd I’m so blind Grace is talentBut I have gutsNot too gallantBut I’m no klutz  I’m no poetNever could shoveWords, and know thatThey’d define love It’s hard to speakIn such a wayI’ve reached my peakOf things to say
— Lil Z, Jun 22, 2010
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Critiques

xena465

xena465

16 years 1 month ago

Well I think you're a poet

I enjoyed this very much Lil. A really nice flow and good fun. Xena Quote: Science is what you know; philosophy is what you don't know. - Bertrand Russell
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Lil Z

16 years 1 month ago

Thanks again!

Thank you very much for your comments and support!
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scribbler

16 years 1 month ago

things to say

good rhyme and rhythm with minimal words.write on........scribbler
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Lil Z

16 years 1 month ago

Thank you!

Hey, I think I'll try that, I love to rap to my poems! Oh, and my name is Zach too.
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Atticus

16 years 1 month ago

Z,

Really nice work! Sharp, concise, to the point, and has a great beat. all the best, Nathaniel
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Mari Shine

16 years ago

Wow!

Your strong poetic ability shines through in this finely penned poem Zac - you ARE a poet and a very good one too! I enjoyed reading this poem very much and I thank you for sharing it.
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magics02

16 years ago

You climb that mountain

ANd drink from that fountain of youth love peace your own song Lil Z.... grooving right along:) Love at ya guy Mona xoxoxo
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Lil Z

16 years ago

Awesome!

5 stars for a brilliant comment!

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