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DANDELION

 "DANDELIONS" Ann June 21st 2010.

 

Your crown of lions

in brilliant yellow, 

stars all fields on earth, 

with constellations reflecting Milky Ways.

 

The substance in your pinkish stems, 

your toothed leaf a memory of dragons, 

the Devil's bucket, named in Danish

dripping sticky,

could make you formidable and strange.

 

Yet your petals radiantly glow, 

their softness little children know against the cheek

the leaves hang limp when cut,

no tags like thistles artichokes or rose.

 

Praised, cursed for your intrusion on

lawns of smart abodes, 

you adorn this world with Bonsai-like suns, 

and lift the hearts of many,

make your contrast merry jolly.

 

We love you for your folly, 

Then your gamboge head it closes, 

just a while then when it opens, 

displays its helicopter seeds, 

a ball that echoes your crown.

 

Looking now like magic fountains,

gossamer spun, 

filaments designed to catch the wind,

to tell the time, 

to fly away to other fields 

to flower again another day.


 

 

 

 

 

 

 
— Nordic cloud, Jun 22, 2010

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Region, Country: Oslo and Flatdal, Norway., NOR

Favorite Poets: Too daunting this.

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Seren

Seren

15 years 11 months ago

Just a sigh darlin love and

Just a sigh darlin love and big hugs JayCee and another (“In time we hate that which we often fear.” William Shakespeare quote)
greeneyes

greeneyes

15 years 11 months ago

Beautiful

My chlidren bring me dandelions all summer long!
Nordic cloud

Nordic cloud

15 years 11 months ago

I mentioned you Elizabeth

Ann of Norway While I was writing my comment you got in first, yes they are wondrous "Fanden's melkebötter" and we love them. Thank you greeneyes. Love Ann
Nordic cloud

Nordic cloud

15 years 11 months ago

I sent for a catalogue of flower seeds.

Ann of Norway And what I got astonished me as there were several sides for the common dandelion, so many many varieties I didn't know existed, these were better for making salads, these for their roots for coffee-substitute, these for the flowers etc. mind boggling, when we take it for granted that all those soft yellow suns are different. Much like the surprise with sunflowers those dark burgundy red ones being so very beautiful. I found a spent dandelion crown, on a woodland path, a dandelion chain, it had seeded and was the most lovely whole seed sight, after I had photographed it I took it to the stream nearby and beside it I saw a simple curved twig hut about breast height, so I made the crown into a circle and placed it on the hut, it immediately looked as though a wood sprite princess used this bower and took on a fairy tale presence. I shall put it on Facebook in an album with this description I think. Greeneyes would be inspired to write a fairy tale about it! Lovely lovely weed. My father knew the gardener who in the early 1900's went out every morning to cut the dandelion of on the lawn, he declared that after doing this every single day for a long time he was excited to say that it had finally given up! They grow in town streets, on dry high walls, in tree joins, wherever they find the possibility and once there they don't let go. Roots down so deep that its difficult to pull them out- I have made coffee with them, roasting them first. They add to a salad well too, the young ones but they should preferably be put under an old chimney in the garden to bleach much like leeks or celery.
xena465

xena465

15 years 11 months ago

Dandelions...

Not enough people appreciate the beauty of these wonderful flowers, but they sure will now with this lovely write Ann. Xena Quote: Science is what you know; philosophy is what you don't know. - Bertrand Russell
mand

mand

15 years 11 months ago

Lovely Ann, I had to look a

Lovely Ann, I had to look a couple of the words up, you used them well. I love the image of bonsai-suns dotted here and there. Again I am astounded by your imagery and use of language. Love to you for distributing such happy thoughts and ideas. Mand xxxxx
judyanne

judyanne

15 years 11 months ago

sigh - dandelions

when i was little i used to think they were sunflowers (until my sister planted sunflowers at our back gate and i saw the difference) i love to make dandelion chains still love to you annanya from judyanne xxxx http://www.strategicpublishinggroup.com/title/TwentyMyPrettyPonies.html
S

scribbler

15 years 11 months ago

dandelion

types of dandelion:damned,cursed,choking,#%^king, lovely,delicate,windblown.All named according to perspective.Beautiful write.......scribbler
Geezer

Geezer

15 years 11 months ago

I have always...

loved the dandilion, and do not understand why people do not give their lawns over to them completely. After all, they do not need much in the way of care, they are brighter and prettier that just green grass, and think of all the money you might save from not trying to get rid of them! Love the name you have given them, Bonsai-Sun! Indeed! ~ love, Gee
Nordic cloud

Nordic cloud

15 years 11 months ago

Thank you my knight Sir Gee.

Ann of Norway I shall immediately send my gardener round to your house and they will plant many different varieties of Dandelion for you, and you can enjoy them much as the wife of the Caliphate of Cordoba did when she asked to see snow, he planted almond trees all round the palace and there was snow in January when the almond trees flower( at least today they do!) That's why there are so many almond trees in Spain!! Only you will have a field of golden yellow to enjoy, perhaps representing the sun, the bonsai suns and you will have lovely dreams thinking of them. Yours Ann, queenie!
Geezer

Geezer

15 years 11 months ago

My Queen...

Thank you so very much, I will be pleased to no end. I appreciate your concern for the enhancement of my surroundings. Your graciousness is legend. your knight, ~ Sir Gee