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DANDELION
"DANDELIONS" Ann June 21st 2010.
Your crown of lions
in brilliant yellow,
stars all fields on earth,
with constellations reflecting Milky Ways.
The substance in your pinkish stems,
your toothed leaf a memory of dragons,
the Devil's bucket, named in Danish
dripping sticky,
could make you formidable and strange.
Yet your petals radiantly glow,
their softness little children know against the cheek
the leaves hang limp when cut,
no tags like thistles artichokes or rose.
Praised, cursed for your intrusion on
lawns of smart abodes,
you adorn this world with Bonsai-like suns,
and lift the hearts of many,
make your contrast merry jolly.
We love you for your folly,
Then your gamboge head it closes,
just a while then when it opens,
displays its helicopter seeds,
a ball that echoes your crown.
Looking now like magic fountains,
gossamer spun,
filaments designed to catch the wind,
to tell the time,
to fly away to other fields
to flower again another day.
Critiques
Seren
15 years 11 months ago
Just a sigh darlin love and
greeneyes
15 years 11 months ago
Beautiful
Nordic cloud
15 years 11 months ago
I mentioned you Elizabeth
Nordic cloud
15 years 11 months ago
I sent for a catalogue of flower seeds.
xena465
15 years 11 months ago
Dandelions...
mand
15 years 11 months ago
Lovely Ann, I had to look a
judyanne
15 years 11 months ago
sigh - dandelions
scribbler
15 years 11 months ago
dandelion
Geezer
15 years 11 months ago
I have always...
Nordic cloud
15 years 11 months ago
Thank you my knight Sir Gee.
Geezer
15 years 11 months ago
My Queen...