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Jun 22, 2010
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Poem Noir (Eddie Dunn's)
They were playing that slow song
I remember from years ago
She was dancing by herself
She couldn’t have been more wrong
I’ve seen her in my bad dreams
with her wounds that haven’t healed
and an affection for the wrong move
I’m older now, so maybe I wasn’t listening
to a heart that was tired of the hard rain
The way she looked at me
let me know we could find a way
I said you’re lookin’ second to none
She said where have you been
as we danced in a bar named Eddie Dunn’s
Sometimes the simplest mercies
precipitate a foray into the embers
that can heal a broken heart
We held each other as one
and I stayed there with her
on the dance floor at Eddie Dunn’s
— Michael Anthony, Jun 22, 2010
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Ravenshakti
15 years 11 months ago
Dancing at Eddie Dunn's...