flooding river

Welcome to the site. I hope you are enjoying yourself so far. It was nice meeting you in chat and hope to see more of you on the site. Your poem here, the critique choices are interesting, I always go with "give the raw truth" so the other poets will at least feel free to give me their view of a write... but I understand the need for choices as well. I like the poem, the title is good as well as the theme. The only other thing I could mention comes under the heading of "mechanics", so I won't... but for me was a good read, thanks for posting if you need any help getting around the site, just ask, I'd be glad to help. Richard

It describes to me the destruction, pain and misery that a raging river can bring upon us...well done Faith Xena Quote: Science is what you know; philosophy is what you don't know. - Bertrand Russell

Wow this is really good, I actually had 2 friends drown in a river, at different times in different rivers but both drowned. the river can be very unforgiving. nice write You can never pick anyone up if you are busy putting them down

I believe you captured that ole' river as best could be. Nice work. all the best, Nathaniel