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Jun 21, 2010
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In for the moment
her eyes shine with light
the ward is bright
the beds two to a room
"I miss you" she speaks
sitting beside him
Hes staring past the
mesh screens down
to the well kept lawns
the small pine trees
stretching away to
the tree line
"I miss you" he echos
all of this has changed
the ward the feel
He remembers the
trestle the smell of
the ties the water
alive and shinning
below
her hair clip holds back
a bang
"hows your mother"
how many moments
has he fallen
left them
here this safe vantage
point full of sun
moonlight
full of others out
past the edge
"she's fine"
he sips the coffee
with shakey hands
that she has carefully
brought all this way
on the bus up the highway
to the Hospital
they sit like this
through the thick
and now the thin
she takes him off ward
down to the canteen
he follows at ease
the sadness burning off
like a mist come daybreak
the dusk sun filling up
the halls
at night he dreams of
the trestle and of wolves
drinking from the stream
below
she is standing with
moonlight in her
hair like a halo
— Esker, Jun 21, 2010
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Critiques
bunnymug
16 years 1 month ago
tears...
Esker
16 years 1 month ago
turn point
pleiades
16 years 1 month ago
“he sips the coffeewith
Esker
16 years 1 month ago
this was real
anonymous1
16 years 1 month ago
Yes, slice of life is it exactly.
Seren
16 years 1 month ago
Dear Steven
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