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lou
lou

Sexual IQ

Have I the acumen to retain your respect
the wits, the savvy, to gain your adoration
to overcome the barriers that you erect
the cerebrum to secure your affection

Intellect is not important to you I suspect
brains would cool your ardour, and cause deflation

A woman’s physical beauty you won’t reject
your such a flirt I bet you would give a thorough inspection

While pondering the matter, I think you should reflect
on the fact that you’re a man so adept at seduction
who Is so willing to reject
a girl due to her IQ and cause introspection


— lou, Jun 21, 2010

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Region, Country: West London, GBR

Favorite Poets: Pablo Neruda , Jack Kerouac, Alan Ginsberg, D.H Lawrence, Jim Morrison's lyrics,

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loved

loved

15 years 11 months ago

first tell me this

a ukayite fan once told me that he had changed his old snap 86 years one after reading my poems and posted a 19 age snap he told me this on Friday nights all girls dress up in their best brainless suits and expose sufficiently to draw the rest the nite tells and history is avoided by pills IS IT STILL SO TRUE I MAY BE COMING TO UK LATER is it so still ur from uk
lou

lou

15 years 11 months ago

Say What?

Loved what sort of critique is that ? LOL lou xx
loved

loved

15 years 11 months ago

lol

.THATS WHAT I WANTED U TO DO L O L
Professor Purple

Professor Purple

15 years 11 months ago

Not all guys are like that!

Not all guys are like that! Yeah OK far too many are... Anyhow, great poem! It really feels like you're talking to someone specific. A few tweaks in my opinion: superstition- is that really the right word? Maybe rejection, repulsion? Caps on Physical and Is (last stanza)- first one possibly intentional, though I like it better without, second one looks like a typo. IQ- not in the same "register" as the rest, maybe brain, intellect, mind? Thanks for a fun read! Antoine
lou

lou

15 years 11 months ago

Antoine

Thank you lou xx
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scribbler

15 years 11 months ago

"purp"is

right.Some guys are even worse lol.Sounds like you've encountered a few real winners.oh yeah,line 8 your should be you're.later.........scribbler
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Atticus

15 years 11 months ago

Bravo!

Rhythm, word choice - clever yet truth telling. This is the most entertaining little write that I've had the pleasure of reading in some time. Believe me when I say it's much more than the subject matter that makes it so. All the best, Nathaniel
lou

lou

15 years 11 months ago

Hi

Thanks lou xx