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As Children Do
Wake to allied comradeship and with new found
strength fight the massive mammoth monsters,
then breakfast a while and dream of riddles.
Stir to the call of fragrant bouquets
stimulating mystic balms of
ambiguous shapes and colours and listen
in awe while regarding ripples manifest around
the sound of the butterfly wing fluttering
fluidly through its delicate trembling dance.
Later, from the apex of the slippery slide,
feel the taste of new memories
as they flicker joyously into existence
rushing, brushing lovingly over the epidermis of life.
Then touch the vision of the enigma of the moment
in the epicure of the swing at its highest arc in the profoundly
earnest attempt to capture the mystery of the day
while squealing in sheer delight.
Complete the experience with twilight summersaults and
cartwheels and standing on our heads
and writing letters to the angels.
Critiques
Candlewitch
15 years 11 months ago
Dear Judy
judyanne
15 years 11 months ago
dear cat
xena465
15 years 11 months ago
I love it Judy
judyanne
15 years 11 months ago
to go and play as children do
Lonnie
15 years 11 months ago
Thank you, Judy!
judyanne
15 years 11 months ago
thank you lonnie
scribbler
15 years 11 months ago
children
judyanne
15 years 11 months ago
hey scribbler
Seren
15 years 11 months ago
Its your turn to take a bow
judyanne
15 years 11 months ago
you're very kind jc
judyanne
15 years 11 months ago
wasn't aware that you are a kiwi !!!!
shirley harrison
15 years 11 months ago
ah i would love to be 5 again!
judyanne
15 years 11 months ago
ah to be any age again
mand
15 years 11 months ago
Oh those memories of
judyanne
15 years 11 months ago
so kind mand
greeneyes
15 years 11 months ago
beautiful
judyanne
15 years 11 months ago
thank you very much greeneyes
Mark
15 years 11 months ago
Moving
judyanne
15 years 11 months ago
thanks sillybull