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As Children Do
Wake to allied comradeship and with new found
strength fight the massive mammoth monsters,
then breakfast a while and dream of riddles.
Stir to the call of fragrant bouquets
stimulating mystic balms of
ambiguous shapes and colours and listen
in awe while regarding ripples manifest around
the sound of the butterfly wing fluttering
fluidly through its delicate trembling dance.
Later, from the apex of the slippery slide,
feel the taste of new memories
as they flicker joyously into existence
rushing, brushing lovingly over the epidermis of life.
Then touch the vision of the enigma of the moment
in the epicure of the swing at its highest arc in the profoundly
earnest attempt to capture the mystery of the day
while squealing in sheer delight.
Complete the experience with twilight summersaults and
cartwheels and standing on our heads
and writing letters to the angels.
Critiques
Candlewitch
16 years 1 month ago
Dear Judy
judyanne
16 years 1 month ago
dear cat
xena465
16 years 1 month ago
I love it Judy
judyanne
16 years 1 month ago
to go and play as children do
Lonnie
16 years 1 month ago
Thank you, Judy!
judyanne
16 years 1 month ago
thank you lonnie
scribbler
16 years 1 month ago
children
judyanne
16 years 1 month ago
hey scribbler
Seren
16 years 1 month ago
Its your turn to take a bow
judyanne
16 years 1 month ago
you're very kind jc
judyanne
16 years 1 month ago
wasn't aware that you are a kiwi !!!!
shirley harrison
16 years 1 month ago
ah i would love to be 5 again!
judyanne
16 years 1 month ago
ah to be any age again
mand
16 years 1 month ago
Oh those memories of
judyanne
16 years 1 month ago
so kind mand
greeneyes
16 years 1 month ago
beautiful
judyanne
16 years 1 month ago
thank you very much greeneyes
Mark
16 years 1 month ago
Moving
judyanne
16 years 1 month ago
thanks sillybull
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