Electric Blue

Jun 21, 2010 ⭐ See this poem's read count — a supporter feature

Mama

The Lord’s angelI have met here on earthHer name is Miss AliceShe does not live in a palaceBut in paradise here on earth Mama – your loveKnows no boundariesIs a high as the mountainsAnd as deep as the sea Deep within you heartOnly love residesWith such devotionYou took me inUnder your wing With love and hugsLaughter and tearsNo boundariesBetween usOnlyLove Maggie your daughter from across the oceans

When I first met Miss Alice I found my mother we chose each other

It was meant to be

Electric Blue

— Electric Blue, Jun 21, 2010

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xena465

16 years 1 month ago

Hey Maggie

Nice to see you again. Lovely dedication to Miss Alice. Just a couple of wee things that may be typing errs… {The} does not live in a palace ……………………[She} or {that] {It is a} high as the mountains …………………….[It’s high] or [it is high] Xena Quote: Science is what you know; philosophy is what you don't know. - Bertrand Russell

Electric Blue

16 years 1 month ago

Mama

Rosina Yes, I was tired sorry now corrected love and hugs always Maggie xx

Seren

16 years 1 month ago

Dearest Magz

So So sad huni ... sigh beautiful tribute love and big hugs jayCee (“In time we hate that which we often fear.” William Shakespeare quote)

Electric Blue

16 years 1 month ago

Mama

Jay-cee Well this was the moment I Mama on the mountain It was meant to be. just wanted to remember happy times. Mama I see her I hear her just miss my hugs Thank for looking in Hope you are feeling stronger my dear friend xxx Mags

Wilton Joseph

16 years 1 month ago

Mama

I will pinch some of ur thunder. U c I had this dream of mi mum last night and from the moment I saw the title of poem I thought this must be the reason for me dream. It engendered this wonderful sense of feeling good. What are poems for, eh?

Electric Blue

16 years 1 month ago

Mama

Welcome my friend Joseph to the Neopoet family I recently lost mama in April this year I wrote a poem called Tears for Mama and after the funeral I went through the woods down to the riverside drifting dreaming day dreams. Another poem Down by the Riverside I have just written a song for Mama. Titled - In the arms of the angels - still sorting out the music. Electric Blue a little blue

yenti

16 years ago

Maggie

That you feel the presence of your Mama and know that she will always be there, I know it is not the same but one day you will realize how blessed you are to feel that much where others struggle, it is always the physical that we miss with those we love. You take care of those feelings and just whisper her name and she will be there for you, Yours Ian.T

Electric Blue

16 years ago

Mama

Ian Mama will always be with me no matter what. I miss the hugs, the laughter and her quick wit so mischievious was she - sharp as a pin to the end I know Mama hears me I feel it. She brushes my cheek with a kiss of a summer breeze thank you for your friendship always love maggie

magics02

16 years ago

My Maggie gal

What a beautiful poem of Mama. Just beautiful that is all I can say. Miss reading and speaking to you friend Love and Peace Mona

Electric Blue

16 years ago

Mama

Mona Missing you girl Mama is my angel in my soul she stays I feel her with me always so funny is she Always Maggie xxx

shirley harrison

16 years ago

yesterdays are forever!

Dear maggie a truly heart wrenching tribute "beautifully written" with much love .... shirley harrison

Electric Blue

16 years ago

Mama

Shirley Mama what can I say that she was truely God's angel her on earth but she shines with a glow so divine. But with me she will always be. Thank you for looking in on my few words to Mama always Maggie xx

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