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Liquid Pain (Etheree)

  ATeardropLiquid PainA broken heartShattered to piecesWill bleed tears of sorrowDripping pieces of our soulsMemories running down our faceBroken promises have turned to liesWiped away with the sleeves of rejection
— Whiskurz, Jun 21, 2010

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raskin

15 years 11 months ago

Sad content but the

Sad content but the structure of the etheree is beautiful. raskin