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Jun 21, 2010
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Liquid Pain (Etheree)
ATeardropLiquid PainA broken heartShattered to piecesWill bleed tears of sorrowDripping pieces of our soulsMemories running down our faceBroken promises have turned to liesWiped away with the sleeves of rejection
— Whiskurz, Jun 21, 2010
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raskin
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