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Beautifully written with much tenderness. Xena Quote: Science is what you know; philosophy is what you don't know. - Bertrand Russell

Hey, who'd you write this for????????????? Hmmmmmmmmmmm? Superb poetry, in any case, my darling. I love you. ~ Your *Anna* "People sometimes inquire what form of government is most suitable for an artist to live under. To this question there is only one answer. The form of government that is most suitable to the artist is no government at all." Oscar Wilde

and amoungst the chaos a voice of beauty lovely words lucky Mum love and hugs JC x x (“In time we hate that which we often fear.” William Shakespeare quote)

I liked the simile to all the flowers, and nature. I would however, either leave out the lines about the lost bird, and the cloud calling you blind. They just seem out of context with the rest of the poem. If you really need those lines, maybe you could use them in conjunjction with a couple of new ones. Without those lines, the poem still seems cohesive, and tied together. ~ Gee

Ann of Norway O Barry O, you see and feel the textures of life in special ways I think, like an arist do you paint, or dance like the trees? Your pen dances and you paint such lovely words with it to mesmerise our minds and weave us into your thoughts- "I never lived in the rain’s words".... ..."laid my eyes at the meadow of your feet,"... ..."and one cloud calls me blind,"...... ......"where the blue wind left me to remember love"..... ........"in the lilies of your voice".. ...their perfumes and sentiments flood the skies and colour the flowers dear brother mine, Ann.

You never seem to miss a beat my friend. The pacing of this one is truly beautiful and adds so much to the content. Wonderful write. Best, Nathaniel