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D E S I R E BY:itzhak bareket.

...from hot desire to see you,
  to get you,to kiss you,
  to take care of you,
 i'm making songs,music, dance,
 tango?...foxtrot?...slowfox?...
 SLOW MY DEAR,...SLOW...

 it's  slow....too slow???
 maybe waltz?....english waltz?
 you want it faster?... more,more?
 o.k. more!
 rumba,
             congo,
                         salsa,
                  R O C K!...H A R D  ROCK!!!
 wild...crazy...savage movements...

 YEE!!! SUBSTITUTES,,,O.K....O. K...!

 WAN'TO SEE YOU
 
 TO  GET YOU,

 TO TAKE CARE OF YOU
 
 TO KISS YOU

 TO MAKE LOVE TO YOU

 W I T H     Y O U....
— itzhak bareket, Jun 21, 2010

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sunflower

15 years 11 months ago

hello

Oh this is so beautiful, reading every word was a beat into my heart...also well choreographed onto the page. Beautiful!!!
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itzhak bareket

15 years 11 months ago

DEAR SONFLOWER,L O V E !

itzhak bareket THANK YOU VERY MUCH FOR YOUR SO ENTUZIASTIC MESSAGE.THIS PIECE IS ONE OF THE OTHER POEMS PRINTED IN MY COMING BOOK " PRESS CONFERENCE ". nice weekend,your's, itzhak bareket.