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Jun 21, 2010
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D E S I R E BY:itzhak bareket.
...from hot desire to see you,
to get you,to kiss you,
to take care of you,
i'm making songs,music, dance,
tango?...foxtrot?...slowfox?...
SLOW MY DEAR,...SLOW...
it's slow....too slow???
maybe waltz?....english waltz?
you want it faster?... more,more?
o.k. more!
rumba,
congo,
salsa,
R O C K!...H A R D ROCK!!!
wild...crazy...savage movements...
YEE!!! SUBSTITUTES,,,O.K....O. K...!
WAN'TO SEE YOU
TO GET YOU,
TO TAKE CARE OF YOU
TO KISS YOU
TO MAKE LOVE TO YOU
W I T H Y O U....
to get you,to kiss you,
to take care of you,
i'm making songs,music, dance,
tango?...foxtrot?...slowfox?...
SLOW MY DEAR,...SLOW...
it's slow....too slow???
maybe waltz?....english waltz?
you want it faster?... more,more?
o.k. more!
rumba,
congo,
salsa,
R O C K!...H A R D ROCK!!!
wild...crazy...savage movements...
YEE!!! SUBSTITUTES,,,O.K....O. K...!
WAN'TO SEE YOU
TO GET YOU,
TO TAKE CARE OF YOU
TO KISS YOU
TO MAKE LOVE TO YOU
W I T H Y O U....
— itzhak bareket, Jun 21, 2010
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sunflower
16 years 1 month ago
hello
itzhak bareket
16 years 1 month ago
DEAR SONFLOWER,L O V E !
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