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Jun 21, 2010
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Wild weed
I wrote this after the religious clashes in Nigeria. I just don't understand why we won't tolerate each other and respect each other's opinions and ideology!
Penny against another:
Thunder, as when the clouds toss;
And feather against feather:
A thousand fold a quake’s force.
You are water and I- oil.
Am a wild weed to smother:
Dark, you call my path- I, coarse.
So in blind rage you gather
Knife and spear to cause loss
For you think AM all of US.
Slay me then, Brother
Because you chant “Cross!”
And I mouth “Crescent.”
from mini-anthology: Hepatica— slybard, Jun 21, 2010
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xena465
16 years 1 month ago
Welcome Josh
slybard
16 years 1 month ago
Thanks
U K Atiyodi
16 years 1 month ago
Compressed ideas make this
t. reflexion
16 years 1 month ago
You call me brother...
t. reflexion
16 years 1 month ago
Thanks for the insight...
slybard
16 years 1 month ago
About the piece...
judyanne
16 years 1 month ago
very powerful write josh
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