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Jun 21, 2010
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Wild weed
I wrote this after the religious clashes in Nigeria. I just don't understand why we won't tolerate each other and respect each other's opinions and ideology!
Penny against another:
Thunder, as when the clouds toss;
And feather against feather:
A thousand fold a quake’s force.
You are water and I- oil.
Am a wild weed to smother:
Dark, you call my path- I, coarse.
So in blind rage you gather
Knife and spear to cause loss
For you think AM all of US.
Slay me then, Brother
Because you chant “Cross!”
And I mouth “Crescent.”
from mini-anthology: Hepatica— slybard, Jun 21, 2010
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xena465
15 years 11 months ago
Welcome Josh
slybard
15 years 11 months ago
Thanks
U K Atiyodi
15 years 11 months ago
Compressed ideas make this
t. reflexion
15 years 11 months ago
You call me brother...
t. reflexion
15 years 11 months ago
Thanks for the insight...
slybard
15 years 11 months ago
About the piece...
judyanne
15 years 11 months ago
very powerful write josh