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LZ
Lil Z
Jun 21, 2010 ⭐ See this poem's read count — a supporter feature

Spades to Hearts

She is everything you seeAmazingly uniqueShe wills her spirit in herselfAnd in the words she’ll speak Speaking is her greatest strengthShe gets that from aboveShe always has her perfect graceAnd always shows her love Love is not a poker gameTogether we will showExpressions thought as weird or strangeOur truthful hearts will glow Glowing cheeks on a liarBluffs are deceitful artsYet truth shines brightly in the darkOur hand dealt spades to hearts
— Lil Z, Jun 21, 2010
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xena465

xena465

16 years 1 month ago

Welcome Lil Z

Great write. I love all of it...well done. Xena Quote: Science is what you know; philosophy is what you don't know. - Bertrand Russell
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Lil Z

16 years 1 month ago

Thank you

Thank you very much Julie, your comment is much appreciated!
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shane

16 years 1 month ago

Well done

I love it. It has a beautiful flow to it. I love everything about it.
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scribbler

16 years 1 month ago

hearts

welcome!Great write. good flow,rhythm,rhyme and meter.Only think may be better described as "western classic" not that labels matter......scribbler
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Lil Z

16 years 1 month ago

Thank you!

Thank you Scribbler for your input, your comment is greatly appreciated I assure you!

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