faithmairee

Jun 21, 2010 ⭐ See this poem's read count — a supporter feature

a woman's face wears many masks

a woman's face wears many masks
her precious secrets to conceal
so a man may sit and ponder
if what he sees is truly real

he's a very clear-headed man
who takes his time and sets his goal
he's sure to see the masks diverge
as he taps on the door to her soul

— faithmairee, Jun 21, 2010

About the Author

Region, Country: Florida, United States, USA

Favorite Poets: Lawrence Ferlinghetti, Edna St. Vincent Millay, Lucille Clifton and Elizabeth Bishop

Critiques

faithmairee

16 years 1 month ago

Thank you

your comments are really appreciated...thanks so much...they mean alot!

DawningDaytripper

16 years 1 month ago

This is a great first post

This is a great first post just full of charm, I loved this and it reminds me of what my Grandma used to say, which I can not repeat in public, lol. I look forward to reading more of your writes and welcome to Neopoet! Julie D.D.

xena465

16 years 1 month ago

Welcome Faithmairee

Your words are fabulous and very wise. A great poem, the first of many I hope. Xena Quote: Science is what you know; philosophy is what you don't know. - Bertrand Russell

faithmairee

16 years 1 month ago

Thank You So Much

Thank you for reading my poem and for your lovely comments. You made my heart smile!

WrittenInBlood

16 years 1 month ago

:)

This poem is so good and so true about people and how they interact. Your imagery was amazing. xoxo, §•WrittenInBlood•§

faithmairee

16 years 1 month ago

: )

Thank you for your wonderful remarks. I appeciate them so much!

BrightEyed

16 years 1 month ago

beautiful concept

wish you had written more tho. it left me interested :)

faithmairee

16 years 1 month ago

Thanks Much

Thanks for stopping by and checking out my poem. Nice meeting you in chat! I never say anything I don't mean nor do I say anything to be mean.

hobo

16 years 1 month ago

nice write

This is a very nice write my friend, men are always trying to knock at a girls soul anything he can to be with her. You can never pick anyone up if you are busy putting them down

faithmairee

16 years 1 month ago

Many Thanks

Nice talking to you and it is great meeting you. Thanks for your wonderful remarks. I never say anything I don't mean nor do I say anything to be mean.

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