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Father
In my eyes,
I’ve never known a man
As smart as you
I could swear it was you
Who hung the moon
Never was there anything
You could not do
When I was little and
We would be walking
In the dark
I remember holding
Onto your thumb;
Your hand was so much
Larger than my own,
You would look down
At me and just smile;
I felt safe
I love to look at old
Pictures of you and mom
You were so very handsome;
You deserved the prettiest
Lady for your wife
And I felt like the luckiest
Little girl alive
When I knew I’d done
Something wrong,
Seeing your disappointment
Was the worst form of punishment
I would try everything
Possible to earn a look
Of understanding and a smile
It is hard to watch
Your strong form grow frail
Still, I ask you for your
Advice and wisdom
It has never failed
I love you, Dad
6.20.2010
© Tonya Greenlee
Critiques
magics02
15 years 11 months ago
Tonya
Tonya
15 years 11 months ago
Thanks Mona
Tonya
15 years 11 months ago
Thank you! I so appreciate
shane
15 years 11 months ago
I agree also
Tonya
15 years 11 months ago
I know....... it is so
xena465
15 years 11 months ago
Dear Tonya
Tonya
15 years 11 months ago
He is a very