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FOR WHOM THE BELL TOLLS

FOR WHOM THE BELL TOLLS

 

 

Our group of writers, brave and bold,

Approached the gloomy Boyd stronghold.

These castle walls of hard sandstone,

The English armies left alone.

 

Edward's defeat at Bannockburn

Gave  Boyds' fortunes welcome turn.

Our grateful king, Robert the Bruce,

Gave Boyd Kilmarnock lands to use.

 

So far, so good  :  but even then

These lands were not devoid of men.

Where castle and park grounds now lie,

Were homes for such as you and I.

 

But we could never own the land.

Our clay-built houses, cold and damp,

Would be pulled down around our ears

If feudal Lord found rent arrears.

 

History, within great castle walls,

Destruction caused by cannon balls

Yet nothing known of common man,

Of those like you and I, the damned.

 

So if your Lord comes, once again,

To ask if you will fight for him

It's all to keep his wealth secure,

Refuse - and stay alive though poor                  

 

— Tam the Chanter, Jun 20, 2010

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Roscoe Lane

Roscoe Lane

15 years 11 months ago

A fine piece,

Tam well written, and speaks the truth. We are safest among our own kind. Regards Roscoe..
Seren

Seren

15 years 11 months ago

Dear Ian

This really is a brilliant poem I can offer no suggestion but that you keep writing lol the last two lines are my favourite thats a great ending :) bravo love and hugs JayCee (Quote~~"It is by universal misunderstanding that all agree. For if, by ill luck, people understood each other, they would never agree. "--Charles Baudelaire)
Tam the Chanter

Tam the Chanter

15 years 11 months ago

Lords

You are too forgiving of my efforts and as a punishment you must read "City of Sins" and give me a good literal boot up the backside before it sinks without trace. Regards Ian xx
Seren

Seren

15 years 11 months ago

Ian

Ok off I go then seeya there lol love and hugs JayCee smiles (Quote~~"It is by universal misunderstanding that all agree. For if, by ill luck, people understood each other, they would never agree. "--Charles Baudelaire)