Neopoet

Join the Neopoet online poetry workshop and community to improve as a writer, meet fellow poets, and showcase your work. Sign up, submit your poetry, and get started.

lou
lou
Jun 20, 2010 ⭐ See this poem's read count — a supporter feature

Ardour and Devotion

Lay your weary head against my shoulder
leave the world behind you
let me sooth your furrowed brow
I will smooth away your fear
and keep the bogey man from your door

When you need a friend I'll be there
when you need a lover just call
my adoration is eternal

I return your ardour and devotion
my arms will encircle you
and clasp you to my breast

Let go of all self conscious thought
set yourself free
allow me to lavish you with unconditional love



THE BOGEY MAN IS THE ENGLISH VERSION OF THE BOOGY MAN

— lou, Jun 20, 2010

About the Author

Region, Country: West London, GBR

Favorite Poets: Pablo Neruda , Jack Kerouac, Alan Ginsberg, D.H Lawrence, Jim Morrison's lyrics,

More from this author

Critiques

lou

lou

16 years 1 month ago

Annie

thanks love lou xx
SH

shirley harrison

16 years 1 month ago

unconditional love!

beautifully written peice lou! much love shirley harrison
lou

lou

16 years 1 month ago

Shirley

Thanks much love lou xxx
lou

lou

16 years 1 month ago

DD

Me to DD much love lou xx
Geezer

Geezer

16 years 1 month ago

5 stars for the...

emotion you have expressed, and the way you expressed it! No matter who he is, he cannot ignore your heartfelt plea. If he can, he has a heart of stone! You have made your case. The context is very good, I'm not sure about the title, but can't suggest a new one. The language is good, and I think you began and ended on the right tones. Overall, a great piece of work! Love ya, Gee
lou

lou

16 years 1 month ago

Gee

Thank you, your right about the title, I had my doubts about it. much love lou xx
Seren

Seren

16 years 1 month ago

Dear Lou

loved this heartfelt write Lou just the spelling on bogy ? Bogey man I checked in the spell checker to make sure I was right was unsure to be honest lovely write hun ... love JayCee (“In time we hate that which we often fear.” William Shakespeare quote)
lou

lou

16 years 1 month ago

Jayne

Ta love lou xx
Geezer

Geezer

16 years 1 month ago

New title...

I like your new title. Better than anything I could've suggested. love ya, ~ Gee
lou

lou

16 years 1 month ago

Gee

Thanks lou xx
lou

lou

16 years 1 month ago

Gee

Thanks love lou xx
hobo

hobo

16 years 1 month ago

very tender

very tender, I love to write like this and I love to read this kind of poetry, nice write You can never pick anyone up if you are busy putting them down
lou

lou

16 years 1 month ago

Randy

Thanks love lou xx
judyanne

judyanne

16 years 1 month ago

i really like this lou

but could've sworn i had already commented on it. reads very smoothly, i especially like the title love judy xxxx ps do you really drive taxis - or is your avatar for some other reason? http://www.strategicpublishinggroup.com/title/TwentyMyPrettyPonies.html
lou

lou

16 years 1 month ago

Judy

Poem was on blog, thanks for the nice comments. Lol I don't drive taxis, it was part of a book cover design , that I created when I was at college. love lou xx
lou

lou

16 years 1 month ago

Ian

Thanks lou xx

Join Neopoet to leave a critique

Neopoet is a free community of poets who critique and support each other's writing.

Join free Log in