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magics02
Jun 20, 2010 ⭐ See this poem's read count — a supporter feature

HAPPY FATHERS DAY DAD



Happy Fathers Day to a man I call Dad
The most wonderful man a girl could have
If not for you I would not be here
I thank you for all you did through the years

You always taught me right from wrong
You taught me how to sing my own song
I thank you and just want you to know
The love and admiration I have for you so

A daughters love so strong and true
I would not have made it if not for you
Always knowing I will go the mile
For the Dad to me with that beautiful smile

Happy Fathers Day to you, for you're the best
A man of wisdom put to the test
I always will remember as a little girl
Now as a woman I love you more still

The best kind of man walking around
That's my Dad, I'm so thankful and proud

Happy Father's Day Dad
I love you. Your Daughter Mona
— magics02, Jun 20, 2010

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scribbler

16 years 1 month ago

dad

good quickie.Hmmmm that may have been wrong way to say it lol! only mistake line13 your should be you're.lovely tribute........scribbler
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magics02

16 years 1 month ago

Thank you for that

yes and a great day to you Scribe this Fathers Day. Now I got to go make the meatballs.:) Love at you guy I will catch up with you soon Love Mona
Seren

Seren

16 years 1 month ago

Mona when you get home i

Mona when you get home i will give you a hand with this one I think its lovely ... nice tribute to your dad its not fathers day till september here though ... making me think about it early lol love and big hugs JayCee (“In time we hate that which we often fear.” William Shakespeare quote)
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magics02

16 years 1 month ago

Thank you Jayne

I did not know it hit the spotlight but I will tell him and thank you for the read and comment. Love,Mona xoxo
Candlewitch

Candlewitch

16 years 1 month ago

Dear Mona

Your father can be very proud of the daughter he raised. Love, Cat
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magics02

16 years 1 month ago

Aw Thank you Golden Lady

That is exactly what he told me today too. Thank you so much for stopping by and the comments and I hope you are feeling better my lady friend. Love Mona xoxox
Seren

Seren

16 years 1 month ago

Mona you can tell your dad

Mona you can tell your dad your poem for him got spotlight well done lovely congrates love and big hugs JayCee x x x (“In time we hate that which we often fear.” William Shakespeare quote)
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magics02

16 years 1 month ago

Thank you Annie

My Dad loved it when I read it to him and he made me put it in something for safe keeping, we all had a good day but I am so tired I can not sleep again. Thanks for stopping in and I appreciate that. Peace Mona
xena465

xena465

16 years 1 month ago

Dear Mona

A lovely tribute to your dad for Father's Day. Xena Quote: Science is what you know; philosophy is what you don't know. - Bertrand Russell
mand

mand

16 years 1 month ago

lovely sentiments for your

lovely sentiments for your dad Mona, precious gifts aren't they, you did him proud. Love Mand xxxx
hobo

hobo

16 years 1 month ago

nice dedi

very nice dedi for you dad You can never pick anyone up if you are busy putting them down

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