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wAntED AN hEiR...... BEDDING PARTNERS

Child out side wedlock

 

is cheating

 

mistress or not

 

so you provide for both

 

now don’t hide

 

as you have enjoyed

 

another free ride .

 

 

 

Child out  of Wed-Bed-lock

 

Child or no child

 

you have an heir

 

legal or illegal

 

now friend own up

 

you that can’t ever hide.

 

your wife is a mismatch with you

 

but let her now

 

arrange a changed horse ride

 

and

 

don’t get mad at her,

 

have another one, with pride.




UNIVERSAL REQUEST


A POETS HEART SWELLS OUT

WHEN HE GETS A CLAP

 AND OR on THE INTERNET

A COMMENT OR SLAP.

SOMEONE HAS APPLIED ONES MIND  

ITS NICE

EACH ONE OF US HAS TO PAY SOME PRICE.

THIS IS A SIMPLE REQUEST

 WELL MANY MAY  NOT READ

perhaps its my endeavor to start

a commenting BREED...

OF POETS ON NEOPOET HERE
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one and all.....

















— loved, Jun 20, 2010

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lou

lou

15 years 11 months ago

True

It works as a free form poem, but maybe you could tidy it up by in the 2nd stanza by removing let her know or say don't be a coward let her know, and ending it on arrange a new horse ride. What do you think? I think it would flow better, but it's only a suggestion. love lou xx
loved

loved

15 years 11 months ago

ur

welcome to change if u understand the metaphorical meaning of a ride horizontally albeit... and another horse meta -for matter a guy altered
lou

lou

15 years 11 months ago

I

obviously don't understand louise xx
loved

loved

15 years 11 months ago

IGNORE

...THATS ALL ISSUE CLOSED AS SOME GREAT POET HERE SAYS
lou

lou

15 years 11 months ago

OR

Maybe I do lol
xena465

xena465

15 years 11 months ago

Very witty Loved

Brilliant, a little naughty on the riding, but well why not if she's going to do it anyway, may as well give the permission. Xena Quote: Science is what you know; philosophy is what you don't know. - Bertrand Russell
Seren

Seren

15 years 11 months ago

Dear Loved

Needs a little tidy up re:format Loved .. will be back in the edits and give you the last star lol an incentive you might say lol love and hugs JayCee x x x (“In time we hate that which we often fear.” William Shakespeare quote)
SH

shirley harrison

15 years 11 months ago

The horns of a cheat!

if you make your bed ,you must lye down in it! Wonderfu poem Loved your very enjoyable topic! your gr88888888888888 with love shirley harrison
SH

shirley harrison

15 years 11 months ago

The horns of a cheat!

if you make your bed ,you must lye down in it! Wonderful poem Loved very enjoyable topic! your gr88888888888888 with love shirley harrison
loved

loved

15 years 11 months ago

NICE BEDS

...THE GUY WHO WROTE THE ARTICLE IS NOW AT A LOSS AFTER READING THIS POEM WE CAN'T REALLY THROW STONES AT OTHERS IF WE WANT TO CONTINUE TO STAY IN GLASS HOUSES CAN WE>>>>>>>>>>???????????? IF A MAN CAN THEN WOMEN CAN AND WILL ALWAYS BEAT THE MAN AS ONLY A WOMAN CAN DECIDE WITH WHOM..... REGARDS TO ALL THE WORLD IS DICEY SOME THINK THEY OWN IT INTERNET I MEAN