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close your eyes

Close Your Eyes

Close your eyes,
for one simple moment feel free.
Close your eyes,
remember these words that flow within me.
Enchanted I scream
and cold mornings
vanish for an eternity.

Alone in solitude,
this day shall not,
will not I scream.
This day will not confine you.
Close your eyes and remember these words,
i pray you,     listen,
in these times I will remind you.

Close your eyes,
tears gone cold.
Alow this day not an eternity,
alow this moments dream a reality.
One single moment this day,
in heart you shall not feel old
I pray you believe.
Close your eyes
and feel free.
 

— reepa, Jun 20, 2010

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Region, Country: Eastern cape, South Africa, ZAF

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Ravenshakti

Ravenshakti

15 years 11 months ago

Close Your Eyes...

Ahhh Reepa... This poem is so very exquisite...the passion here is magnificent. I feel your words deep inside of me... I can almost hear your voice... "alow this moments dream a reality" These words, carry a very special feeling... a magic... Thank you for creating this beauty. Gentle regards, Raven-Shakti
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sammysew

15 years 11 months ago

This is wonderful Reepa, I

This is wonderful Reepa, I could immediately imagine you standing behind me whispering these words into my ear. Very magical and comforting. Sammy x