Beneath

glow like radiant flame
the soul dancing
I feel the cool air
through your eyes
you are a channel
of refraction

charmed
petite
attuned

I will consider
climbing down
to this level
to see

eye to eye
but at the moment
Im involved
but you can wait

you can be
another
treasure

gathered in the
greatness

— Esker, Jun 19, 2010

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Region, Country: north ontario, CAN

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Critiques

Seren

15 years 11 months ago

Steven I needed some beauty

Steven I needed some beauty and to be awed you gave it to me you have calmed my soul it was breaking or felt broken ... wonderful words as always love JayCee (“In time we hate that which we often fear.” William Shakespeare quote)

Mark

15 years 11 months ago

Climbing down

Climbing down is a necessity to bring out the beauty, the treasure you speak of, Steven. Yes, this poem is so agreeable.. Mark (sillybull)

Beauregard

15 years 11 months ago

A charming, petite, attuned poem

enjoyed it Esker. Kelsey "In criticism I will be bold, and as sternly, absolutely just with friend and foe. From this purpose nothing shall turn me." -Edgar Allan Poe