Nordic cloud

Jun 19, 2010 ⭐ See this poem's read count — a supporter feature

WONDERS NEVER CEASE

"WONDERS NEVER CEASE" Ann

dream

speech

envisioned reality

a disembodied voice

a gentle sigh

a moan of delight

what might

the magnet

mind entranced

the spirit sewn

the limbs in air entwined

like ghosts

connect in time's short span

seeming close

so near

and yet

so many miles away

all senses wakened

rocked

defying relativity

we smile content

and yet

no tangible presence felt

until the day

they met

the sight

the touch

electric light

blaze up

the distant voice

is flesh

is real

is grabbed, held,

loved

in aura's each

effervescent

crystallised

sparkling

brilliant reds and greens,

blues and purples,

tourmalines

faceted

sheen

those screaming joys

echoed

now ascend

kiss

melts into

one

begun

a growing.

— Nordic cloud, Jun 19, 2010

About the Author

Region, Country: Oslo and Flatdal, Norway., NOR

Favorite Poets: Too daunting this.

Critiques

DawningDaytripper

16 years 1 month ago

Well I read it and think of

Well I read it and think of you, flirting with each, only a few words worthy to touch the page and all that you need to complete the thought and image. Wonderful Ann. I wouldn't change a thing. Julie D.D.

xena465

16 years 1 month ago

I agree with Julie

A fabulous piece of writing Ann. Xena Quote: Science is what you know; philosophy is what you don't know. - Bertrand Russell

Seren

16 years 1 month ago

Dearest Ann

I havent forgotten your edit on your other poem I have been busy as the last few days,but I plan on catching up with a few edits tonight will try and get it on the poem by tomorrow and I have to agree with Julie ... I wouldnt change a thing brava big smile love and biggest hugs JayCee x x x x (“In time we hate that which we often fear.” William Shakespeare quote)

Kailashana

16 years 1 month ago

Oh, Ann. You of the

Oh, Ann. You of the beautiful heart and soulful words.... You are loved. ~ The ultimate measure of a man is not where he stands in moments of comfort, but where he stands at times of challenge and controversy. ~ Dr. Martin Luther King, Jr.

loved

16 years 1 month ago

ITS LIKE

....... A SOLILOQUY BY SHAKES;;;;''' CREATIVE CREATURES

judyanne

16 years 1 month ago

no, wonders never do cease do they?

'effervescent crystallised sparkling brilliant reds and greens, blues and purples, tourmalines faceted sheen' just beautiful annanya love and hugs judyanne xxxx http://www.strategicpublishinggroup.com/title/TwentyMyPrettyPonies.html

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