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brittle light
brittle light
Jun 19, 2010 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Refreshening

       "Refreshening"
              Haiku

    Green gecko dragon
  under gentle falling rain
     dancing on bamboo
— brittle light, Jun 19, 2010

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Region, Country: upstate New York USA, USA

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Kailashana

Kailashana

15 years 11 months ago

Oooooooo. love this.

Oooooooo. love this. bicycling the Jesus dragon runs across the water Thanks. ~A The ultimate measure of a man is not where he stands in moments of comfort, but where he stands at times of challenge and controversy. ~ Dr. Martin Luther King, Jr missed this misspelling too... hiccup!
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barbsdad2003

15 years 11 months ago

Beautiful!

And oooooo, so do I. Thanx, Chuck PS: You might want to fix gecko. Otherwise perfect.
Kailashana

Kailashana

15 years 11 months ago

lol. I noticed then

lol. I noticed then forgot. ;-) The ultimate measure of a man is not where he stands in moments of comfort, but where he stands at times of challenge and controversy. ~ Dr. Martin Luther King, Jr.