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Jun 19, 2010
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The World Behind my Wall
Its like looking in on a secret
one i havnt heard yet
I dont know what ill do
what i'll say yet.
I get told bits, peices,
Just some to know clues
on what i might do.
I've seen movies,
but i havnt seen the future.
Im ready to go
get rid of this.
I have to know it all
Im ready to know
just what i'll say.
im just one of the few
that're left in this room.
Ready to escape soon
to feel the rain and wonder.
Im no longer a kid.
It's time to run in the rain,
shine with the lightning,
& be heard like the thunder.
— ANC1996, Jun 19, 2010
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scribbler
16 years 1 month ago
the world
ANC1996
16 years 1 month ago
Thankyah (:
Esker
16 years 1 month ago
solid poem
ANC1996
16 years 1 month ago
Thankss(:
weirdelf
16 years ago
Love the poem, Adri, but it's a bit of a fixer-upper
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