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Jun 19, 2010
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a letter from Home
Tears are pointless, inept, unproductive.
We still have evermore
and after that, eternity.
But to rest your mind I’m dropping you a line
to describe my present scenery.
Painted canvas splashed all colours
washing the rainbow
and in-between
and then yet more pigmented brilliance
eyes still there have yet to see.
Symphonic echo resounds emotive,
warbling notes
so pure and clear
with harmonics dividing the chromatic scale
ears are deaf to over there.
Fragrant multi-eternal bouquets.
Even Shakespeare
has difficulty
finding words to describe smell’s purity
denied the soul until it’s here.
Sense of belonging, love abounding.
Knowledge of
great security.
Peaceful, calm, revising lessons
while waiting for you to follow me.
— judyanne, Jun 19, 2010
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Critiques
Mark
16 years 1 month ago
Smooth, just so smooth
judyanne
16 years 1 month ago
thanks sillybull
shirley harrison
16 years 1 month ago
Lovely judy
judyanne
16 years 1 month ago
hi shirley harrison my friend
Seren
16 years 1 month ago
“while waiting for you to
judyanne
16 years 1 month ago
thanks jc
scribbler
16 years 1 month ago
home
judyanne
16 years 1 month ago
hi scribbler
judyanne
16 years 1 month ago
just wanted to say
judyanne
16 years 1 month ago
hi annie
Esker
16 years 1 month ago
sanctuary of words
judyanne
16 years 1 month ago
the garden of evermore....
Candlewitch
16 years 1 month ago
Dear Judy
judyanne
16 years 1 month ago
spot on cat
Bluesky Woman
16 years 1 month ago
nice meter and rhythm,
judyanne
16 years 1 month ago
thank you leigh
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