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Jun 19, 2010
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a letter from Home
Tears are pointless, inept, unproductive.
We still have evermore
and after that, eternity.
But to rest your mind I’m dropping you a line
to describe my present scenery.
Painted canvas splashed all colours
washing the rainbow
and in-between
and then yet more pigmented brilliance
eyes still there have yet to see.
Symphonic echo resounds emotive,
warbling notes
so pure and clear
with harmonics dividing the chromatic scale
ears are deaf to over there.
Fragrant multi-eternal bouquets.
Even Shakespeare
has difficulty
finding words to describe smell’s purity
denied the soul until it’s here.
Sense of belonging, love abounding.
Knowledge of
great security.
Peaceful, calm, revising lessons
while waiting for you to follow me.
— judyanne, Jun 19, 2010
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Critiques
Mark
15 years 11 months ago
Smooth, just so smooth
judyanne
15 years 11 months ago
thanks sillybull
shirley harrison
15 years 11 months ago
Lovely judy
judyanne
15 years 11 months ago
hi shirley harrison my friend
Seren
15 years 11 months ago
“while waiting for you to
judyanne
15 years 11 months ago
thanks jc
scribbler
15 years 11 months ago
home
judyanne
15 years 11 months ago
hi scribbler
judyanne
15 years 11 months ago
just wanted to say
judyanne
15 years 11 months ago
hi annie
Esker
15 years 11 months ago
sanctuary of words
judyanne
15 years 11 months ago
the garden of evermore....
Candlewitch
15 years 11 months ago
Dear Judy
judyanne
15 years 11 months ago
spot on cat
Bluesky Woman
15 years 11 months ago
nice meter and rhythm,
judyanne
15 years 11 months ago
thank you leigh