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Jun 18, 2010
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THE SCOUT
for James
You were four years old when I was born
you were always there to warn
and watch out for a younger me
now I'm older and I see
Came to school, you went before
I wasn't first to cross the door
your presence managed to prepare
all involved, I'd soon be there
You were old enough to hunt 'fore me
but I would tag along to see
how to spot both game and sign
for when the time to hunt was mine
By time we both had gotten older
and each of us had grown much bolder
we'd often wander off alone
hoping our skills to further hone
After you went into uniform
when fall days became unwarm
you'd come home on leave often to hunt
now led to stand by larger runt
When your army days had passed
and neither's legs were quite so fast
in scouting we would oft' take turn
since both had little time to burn
Remember that big ten point buck?
your taking him was not just luck
I'd leased the land and built the stand
that brought said monarch to your hand
But that big swamp we used to fish
and catch as many as we'd wish
you were first to hike in there
willing with me this spot to share
It took some work, but we had fun
for years in woods from sun to sun
I still recall our last short trip
as cancer held you in its grip
Too soon the end of our shared time
tears flow as I write this rhyme
its back the way it used to be
again you scout ahead of me
You were four years old when I was born
you were always there to warn
and watch out for a younger me
now I'm older and I see
Came to school, you went before
I wasn't first to cross the door
your presence managed to prepare
all involved, I'd soon be there
You were old enough to hunt 'fore me
but I would tag along to see
how to spot both game and sign
for when the time to hunt was mine
By time we both had gotten older
and each of us had grown much bolder
we'd often wander off alone
hoping our skills to further hone
After you went into uniform
when fall days became unwarm
you'd come home on leave often to hunt
now led to stand by larger runt
When your army days had passed
and neither's legs were quite so fast
in scouting we would oft' take turn
since both had little time to burn
Remember that big ten point buck?
your taking him was not just luck
I'd leased the land and built the stand
that brought said monarch to your hand
But that big swamp we used to fish
and catch as many as we'd wish
you were first to hike in there
willing with me this spot to share
It took some work, but we had fun
for years in woods from sun to sun
I still recall our last short trip
as cancer held you in its grip
Too soon the end of our shared time
tears flow as I write this rhyme
its back the way it used to be
again you scout ahead of me
— scribbler, Jun 18, 2010
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Seren
15 years 11 months ago
Dear Stan
Seren
15 years 11 months ago
Btw I forgot to add it make
scribbler
15 years 11 months ago
scout
shirley harrison
15 years 11 months ago
"very touching"
scribbler
15 years 11 months ago
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judyanne
15 years 11 months ago
oh stan !!
scribbler
15 years 11 months ago
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scribbler
15 years 11 months ago
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barbsdad2003
15 years 11 months ago
Your last ...
scribbler
15 years 11 months ago
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Esker
15 years 11 months ago
togetherness
scribbler
15 years 11 months ago
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Professor Purple
15 years 11 months ago
A very touching poem and
scribbler
15 years 11 months ago
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Lil Z
15 years 11 months ago
Your poem is very touching!
scribbler
15 years 11 months ago
scout