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Jun 18, 2010
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the falling of Karma's hand
it was in the first ray
of morn it birthed
as your ego bruised
the afterbirth of disdain
smeared your face
then as light filament
moved the hands
on a sundial,
your mask slipped
unveiling the next
of contempt
then I knew
this was going to be
the longest day
I smiled and laughed as you
tore minute pieces of my skin
off my torso into streamers,
displaying your humour
to a world wide audience
but then when i thought
your depravity had found its
limits, it found the next
I am bruised as your ego
I hurt and bleed like you
I lent and found
you get back three fold
what you give out
I feel sorry for you
Karma's hand is falling.
you hate me now
and all I feel is pity
— Seren, Jun 18, 2010
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Beauregard
16 years 1 month ago
You bleed
Seren
16 years 1 month ago
You know I think that this?
CyberSpace
16 years 1 month ago
another great poem sleeping
Beauregard
16 years 1 month ago
hey Mister Snake
CyberSpace
16 years 1 month ago
Hey Kelsey lool
Beauregard
16 years 1 month ago
LOL
Seren
16 years 1 month ago
Kelsey the new guidelines
Seren
16 years 1 month ago
lmao
jetz
16 years 1 month ago
I’m not related….I can
Seren
16 years 1 month ago
Dear Sue
magics02
16 years 1 month ago
gOOD ONE
Seren
16 years 1 month ago
Dear Mona
DawningDaytripper
16 years 1 month ago
Brillant write, I find
Seren
16 years 1 month ago
funnily enough I am over it
judyanne
16 years 1 month ago
nothing more to say
Seren
16 years ago
Dear Judd
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