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Jun 18, 2010
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darling dash, love lily
she breezed in one day
carried on the promise
of life extraordinaire
she wore bravado
as casually as one would a shawl,
slung about her shoulders with abandon
and the passion of flamenco.
I found her a puzzle-
a rubics cube
where the parts of her sum
were forever moving,
changing the game.
her eyes spoke in tongues
and the pulse at the base of her throat
was a mystery
her starfish hands
grabbed hold of my heart
and with mercury running,
made off with my breath
and my will
she showed me the soul of the blues singer
and the meaning of sisterhood
I found the love between women
I threw off my everyday skin
and became a warrior-
an Amazonian warrior
who would burn off her right breast
to better wield her bow
we danced naked in the night sky
and our laughter sent the stars tumbling
she left one day
leaving behind
a black lycra cat-suit
(never to be returned)
a painting of our moment in time,
and the knowlege
of having made a difference
.
.
— pleiades, Jun 18, 2010
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Critiques
Kailashana
15 years 11 months ago
Simply sublime, p! “who
pleiades
15 years 11 months ago
i remember reading
Beauregard
15 years 11 months ago
P.,
pleiades
15 years 11 months ago
re amazonian bow
Seren
15 years 11 months ago
Dearest P
pleiades
15 years 11 months ago
perfection? oh my…you can
Candlewitch
15 years 11 months ago
Dear P
pleiades
15 years 11 months ago
i liked writing those
pleiades
15 years 11 months ago
nice compliment to hear you
Esker
15 years 11 months ago
yes~
pleiades
15 years 11 months ago
dash is victoria‘juicy
anonymous1
15 years 11 months ago
Wonderful observations
pleiades
15 years 11 months ago
what a great comment! many
Seren
15 years 11 months ago
Go Aussie
pleiades
15 years 11 months ago
awww…sweetiethank you so
Beauregard
15 years 11 months ago
You go girl
pleiades
15 years 11 months ago
well kelsey, let me direct
Roscoe Lane
15 years 11 months ago
An incredible piece,
pleiades
15 years 11 months ago
thank you so much roscoe for
shane
15 years 11 months ago
Love it!
pleiades
15 years 11 months ago
thank you shanelook forward
brittle light
15 years 11 months ago
this is so good
pleiades
15 years 11 months ago
thanks for the consideration
Kailashana
15 years 11 months ago
Whatever you do, p….
pleiades
15 years 11 months ago
A…i will not be changing
sunflower
15 years 11 months ago
Impeccable! I enjoy your
odd molly
15 years 11 months ago
Dear P Yes and Yes, this is
judyanne
15 years 11 months ago
beautiful words P
Lil Z
15 years 11 months ago
Absolutely brilliant!