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in the beginning, silence

i.

when I was a Willow, I wanted to know
Wind, so I bent close
to you, River,
I shivered with delight,
and now the passage of time
marks our return
and we are humans,
I tremble with your touch,
You are water inside my earth,
breath upon my skin,
your lips speaking and parting
this silence
with poems.

ii.

I love you as the wild geese love the sky,
as clouds drift over the canopy of leaf and bark,
leave their impression;
images we have
seen, links to broken toys, to faces we have known,
to angels of fire, standing guard

iii.

homeward bound,
emerald mansions we leave,
this unquenchable thirst,

Love.













— Kailashana, Jun 18, 2010

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raskin

15 years 11 months ago

Fine poetry, eh. The

Fine poetry, eh. The first passages are outstanding. I thoroughly enjoyed reading. Nice work. raskin
Candlewitch

Candlewitch

15 years 11 months ago

Dear Anna

The first piece took my breath away. I wish I had your style and grace. Always, Cat
Seren

Seren

15 years 11 months ago

Dearest Mum

through the reeds of time your love will grow beautiful poetry love and hugs JayCee x x x ("Quote:-For every beauty there is an eye somewhere to see it. For every truth there is an ear somewhere to hear it. For every love there is a heart somewhere to receive it.-Ivan Panin")
BW

Bluesky Woman

15 years 11 months ago

wonderful poem

Anna, this poem flows so well... and the imagery is strong, with a careful and sparse choice of words I appreciate it very much. thanks. truly Love is an unquenchable thirst.... and many other things too.... Leigh "The true miracle is not walking on water or walking in air, but simply walking on this earth." Thich Nhat Hanh