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OLD SILVER DOOR
Old silver door,
your paint still there,
the ragged plastic window shade
in holes,
tattered nets,
see through into the ancient greenhouse bench,
now rotting dry and brittle,
snap!
What was that?
A rat, a tool handle-warm worn
smoothed with use,
I trod on it.
I sense the presence, ghost,
not there yet here,
this strangely occupied, abandoned space;
glass shards and splinters crunch,
a dancing crowd of insects
decaying plants,
wilted, hanging limp,
once fresh, new and proud,
now slashed by weather, wind,
and blackened
ash burnt down,
its stench
of charcoal lingers,
the browned,
singed edge of faded note,
flaps,
its rusty nail bent,
a cardboard crumple sound,
step free,
a clink of terra cotta tile,
moss-slipped to black beneath the desk,
a typewriter of vintage mint,
each letter printing air,
do gnomes and goblins use you,
when the night descends
and twilight reigns,
squeal-like scheming curses
and revenge,
for here,
where this ancient edifice was built,
is their domain,
their paradise lost,
which now so slowly, slowly is returning,
raised a dark cross in vapours, colours,
shades of shadowed shapes,
night clouds,
they act as soothing loving capes.
Critiques
raskin
15 years 11 months ago
Awesome imagery of
Kailashana
15 years 11 months ago
This is your best, Ann.
shirley harrison
15 years 11 months ago
Ann
Seren
15 years 11 months ago
Dearest Ann
scribbler
15 years 11 months ago
door
Esker
15 years 11 months ago
journey poem
Nordic cloud
15 years 11 months ago
There really was an old door painted silver
raskin
15 years 11 months ago
Thank you Ann for sharing
judyanne
15 years 11 months ago
so love this write annanya