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Jun 18, 2010
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Cauterize
stuanch words
I dont listen
your eyes directing
hand on my arm
let me just be
holding on to echos
in the sequence
rival glory link of dream
slip beneath the darkness
and Im anchored fast
grounded with this
we birthed drama through
fire We mixed in stream
of hot and laughed through
flames
and in the touch the sparks
rise like a fast evening
— Esker, Jun 18, 2010
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Critiques
Kailashana
15 years 11 months ago
fast evening, but slow
Esker
15 years 11 months ago
limp
Seren
15 years 11 months ago
languid evenings with slow
Nordic cloud
15 years 11 months ago
Oh you tickle my imagination with a touch on my arm