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Tragic_Bliss
Jun 18, 2010 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

One Night

Do you love me, like I love you?
Will you love me, through and through?
When the sky is dark and there is no light,
Will you love me for at least one night?

— Tragic_Bliss, Jun 18, 2010

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Country/Region: Idaho

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shane

15 years 11 months ago

Simple but speaks volumes

I love this poem. Just four little lines that say so much, how we all have felt at one time or another. Great job!
Seren

Seren

15 years 11 months ago

Dear TM

How do I get you to finish this write ? I know you've said it in four lines but I wanted more sorry but I did lol smile love JayCee ("Quote:-For every beauty there is an eye somewhere to see it. For every truth there is an ear somewhere to hear it. For every love there is a heart somewhere to receive it.-Ivan Panin")
lou

lou

15 years 11 months ago

Hi

Have to agree with JayCee, this is the beginning of a poem, but the start of a good poem. Lou xx