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Tragic_Bliss
Jun 18, 2010 ⭐ See this poem's read count — a supporter feature

One Night

Do you love me, like I love you?
Will you love me, through and through?
When the sky is dark and there is no light,
Will you love me for at least one night?

— Tragic_Bliss, Jun 18, 2010

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Country/Region: Idaho

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shane

16 years 1 month ago

Simple but speaks volumes

I love this poem. Just four little lines that say so much, how we all have felt at one time or another. Great job!
Seren

Seren

16 years 1 month ago

Dear TM

How do I get you to finish this write ? I know you've said it in four lines but I wanted more sorry but I did lol smile love JayCee ("Quote:-For every beauty there is an eye somewhere to see it. For every truth there is an ear somewhere to hear it. For every love there is a heart somewhere to receive it.-Ivan Panin")
lou

lou

16 years 1 month ago

Hi

Have to agree with JayCee, this is the beginning of a poem, but the start of a good poem. Lou xx

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